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Hungary X Reader X Prussia: Usual

Ah, a new day. Now you could only hope it will be a good day.

It's was early morning when you woke up. You were going for your usual jogging rute, that you use every day, which goes through the park then around the big lake and back.
When you got out the fog was still there but you could see the sun trying to break through.
About 5 min later you had got a good speed and had just reach the lake when you saw three body looking shadows.
So you ran as fast as you could over there to see if someone was hurt or anything like that.
When got over there it turned out that it just was your dumbass friends having a hangover. And it's was not just any dumbass friends, it was the friends that called themselves "Bad Touch Trio".
'Maybe I should call Elizabeta. She always knows how to deal with these situations' you thought.
While you were calling Elizabeta you had you fun kicking to Gilbert's foot. He grunted slightly in his sleep when you "accidently" kicked to hard.  

"Hello, you are speaking to Elizabeta" a voice finally said from the other line.

"Oh, hey. It's [name]. I need your help with something"

"[name]! It's been a long time since last time we saw each other! What can I do for you today?"

"Well, I found a familiar albino and his friends passed out over here in the park"

"Why doesn't that surprise me? Never mind. Same spot as usual?"

"Yes"

"I´m on my way now, [name]"

"Okay, bye"

When you hung up you had a weird feeling like something was crawling up your leg.
"WHAT THE HELL?" You scream while looking down
"Hey [name]. Nice day isn't it?" whispered Gilbert.
Who just had tilted beer on your leg. "WHY are you doing that?" You tried your best to keep your voice down.
"For fun?" Gilbert answered childish back with a smirk.
"What did you do this time?"
"Nothing we haven't done before" He answered while trying to stand up.
"Then why do you have a black eye"
"Francis wanted to flirt with a big build guy's girlfriend, so he was going to punch Francis when he dodge and I got hit"
"I would like to get that guys autograph" A female voice said from beside you
"Finally you came Elizabeta! What took you so damn long time?" You asked with a big smile but still worried smile.
"I was over at Roderich´s place" Elizabeta answered quickly while glaring at the Prussian "What were you doing at that guy's place? He's a fucking snob" Gilbert hissed.
"It's noting of your business"
"Have you noticed that Francis and Antonio still are passed out?" You quickly said trying to change subject.  
"[name], didn't you have a job interview in about an hour?" The Hungarian woman asked actually changing subject.
"Oh, yes. I have."  
"Then we should go home and make you ready for it"
You knew that that wasn't a question but more like a statement.
"Yeah, let's go"
"HEY! What about me? I mean us!?" Gilbert yelled while pointing towards him and the two sleeping males on the ground.
"You can take care of them by yourself"
After that Elizabeta took your arm under hers and turned away and began to work towards the exit of the park .
"Eliza are you okay? You were acting a little weird back there"
"Of cause I'm okay. I'm just a little mad because the reason you called me was because of the idiot guys"
"I promise that next time I call you it will be a because of a different situation" You said smiling weakly.
"And better be a good situation. Because this time you ruined my time with Roderich" Elizabeta smiled.
"That why I'm here"
'Well this was a weird start of the day' you thought while you and Eliza was walking laughing down the street outside the park.

Okay, this is my first Fanfiction and my first story on english that is this long. So please have mercy
:iconbegplz:

I know they maybe seem a little OOC

And i can't really call it Hungary X Reader X Prussia? Nothing much happend in this one


This turned out to something i didn't planned but i still like it. I think it's good for a first time thing but i could be better. :B

For those who don't know
Elizabeta: :iconhungaryplz:
Gilbert: :iconprussiaplz:
Antonio: :iconspainplz:
Francis: :iconfrancisplz:


And i keep imagine Prussia drinking somewhere alone singing 'All By Myself' :music: :saddrunk: :music: But that would be unawesome......right?

If´s there is any spelling mistakes please tell me.




Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya
You (c) You
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blackveiledbrody123 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My sister was like hungaryplz
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MaloraVurHortson Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
This was really good. :)

Except, that it's "through". Not "tough" when you wrote "which goes tough the park".
Also, it's "that" not "there" when you say "it was the friends there called themselves "Bad Touch Trio".".
You also don't have to put the " ' " at the end of the word "situations".
Another thing is it would be better if you put "doesn't" instead of "didn't" when you write "Why didn't that surprise me?".
Also, I think it would be more proper to write "you asked with a big, but worried smile" instead of putting the word "smile" twice.
And I think you meant to write "nothing" instead of "noting". But either way is still incorrect. I sure the sentence should be "It's none of your business" instead of "It's noting of your business".

I'm not trying to be mean or rude in any way by correcting you. I'm just trying to help because you said that if there were any mistakes to please tell you. So i did! :D It may have a few mistakes but all in all it's very good. Keep up the good work. -Malora
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xPoisonedBlueRosex Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
why is this put as mature content? and the begging kitten icon is so kawaii~! :D
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icyrose27 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Isn't it that the time Gil sang 'all by myself' was in another prussia x reader story? the one where he got dumped by the reader and he kept asking her to forgive him? (Spoiler :P) also < great job :)
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AnaSatre Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:O what one is that?
If you know which one it is can you please tell me? >-<
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Spiritwolf36 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014   General Artist
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if the link doesn't work search PrussiaxReader a little pest problem it's number eight that he sings it
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anime327 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
lol "I would like to get that guys autograph" xDDDD good story!!
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LunaLabrador Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
Thank you :D

I'm glad you liked it :)
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anime327 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
ur welcome :D
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ooh make a next chapter um...please
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